Chapter 785

"Hmm..." after hearing Kato Hui's short speech, Yamada goblin was stunned.

And Yusheng is in line with Kato Hui nodding and saying, "that's it. I respect reality and write it because of Hui's character."

"..." faced with such a result, Yamada goblin silently looked down at the computer, and then thought carefully about the plot designed by Yusheng in the script. Yamada goblin found that if he was at the same angle as Yusheng, he might make the same choice as Yusheng. All of a sudden, Yamada goblins finally found the opportunity to criticize Yusheng in a fair way, and the mood brewing was cut off by Kato Hui and Yusheng, which made the whole person a little depressed.

On the other side, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu almost laughed when he saw that the mountain demon was counterattacked by Kato Hui and Yusheng. However, fortunately, she knew that she was standing on the same position of criticizing Yusheng as the Yamada goblin, so Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu resisted the desire to drop the Yamada goblin, then took the computer around the Yamada goblin and looked carefully to see if she could find something.

Anyway, Jiang is still old and spicy. Compared with Yamada goblin, a little girl with little insight, Xia Zhi Qiu Shiyu has accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with boys because of writing love novels. Although these experiences were invented by Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu with a computer brain, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu is not empty at all to deal with Yusheng, a pure little x man who has been single for many years.

So, in Yusheng's eyes, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu didn't take a close look at the example found by Yamada goblins, but simply glanced at Yusheng with a smile and said faintly: "even if Yusheng gentleman considers the reality and respects Kato Hui's character, it's still your fault to write the script like this!"

"Hmm..." Yusheng may be because he took the Yamada goblins back through Kato Hui. At first, he didn't agree with Shiyu's evaluation of xiazhiqiu, and even put on an expression of 'you say first, I'll refute you'.

However, with the elaboration of xiazhiqiu Shiyu, Yusheng could not calm down, and even began to sweat continuously.

"Since Yu Shengjun, you know Kato Hui's temperament and her reaction when she encounters these similar things. So why do you still use such a bridge in the script? As a novel writer, won't you create a story suitable for Kato according to her character? Or make the story more interesting through other changes "Are you so rusty that you can only pick up people's wisdom, and you don't know how to improve it with some old bridge sections. How can this reflect the charming charm of Kato..."

"Charming......" hearing Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's praise, Kato Hui seemed a little embarrassed and whispered a sentence in her mouth, but she was more worried and looked at Yusheng.

"I... I..." facing Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's aggressive questioning, Yusheng's face became pale and embarrassed. After opening his mouth, he found that Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was right and had nothing to refute. In this case, Yusheng can only reluctantly open his mouth and finally say nothing.

However, xiazhiqiu Shiyu did not let Yusheng go, but continued to teach Yusheng while the iron was hot. "Yu Shengjun, do you think it's good to write the story? It doesn't matter if it's not so interesting. Do you really have an intention to do it?"

Speaking of this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu pushed the computer away, then leaned back against the back of the chair, and scolded Yusheng with his hands around his chest. "If it's just this level, Yusheng Jun, your so-called need to make the best game and make Kato the best heroine. I think you're not just kidding. If so, I don't think so many of us need to play games with you."

Facing the rebuke of Shiyu from xiazhiqiu, Yusheng can't help feeling very ashamed.

However, in fact, after listening to Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's words, Yusheng feels that he has been a little slack recently. In other words, it accounts for the existence of the system. Yusheng copies novels and casually copies comments such as hot and expectation, which makes Yusheng unconsciously start to be somewhat complacent. It also leads to the illusion that Yusheng has a very high level of writing novels. He feels that his ability is still very strong. Everything he writes must be interesting. Especially when xiazhiqiu Shiyu and Yamada goblins stopped staring at Yusheng after reading several scripts of Yuban Meiqin. Without "supervision", Yusheng became more and more complacent and gradually relaxed his requirements for himself.

Now something like this has happened. Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's attitude is like a thunder, which suddenly makes Yusheng wake up. After understanding what mistake he made, Yusheng quickly took back the computer. He looked at the script he had written. Then Yusheng saw a burst of red and black on his face. The more you look at your face, the more ashamed you are.

Even according to the habit, Yamada goblins would add a few words of schadenfreude after xiazhiqiu Shiyu finished Yusheng. As a result, seeing Yusheng's expression, Yamada goblin finally closed his mouth silently and didn't say anything. However, in her heart, she silently admired Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu and felt that the other party was still a little powerful.

"Wang Jun..." as one of the parties, Kato Hui shouted at Yusheng with some worry.

"Ah, Hui..." after hearing Kato Hui's voice, Yusheng subconsciously looked at Kato Hui, and then gave a vague response.

"It doesn't matter. I believe Wang Jun's writing. It's just a failed writing. I believe Wang Jun will write better later." in order to cheer up Yusheng, Kato Hui gently cheered Yusheng.

"I'm sorry, I'm really too relaxed this time. It's my fault to make Hui so boring. I hope you can forgive me..." compared with the other two girls, Kato Hui's gentleness is in sharp contrast to their aggressiveness. Yusheng's heart is a little better, so he sincerely apologized to Kato Hui.

"It doesn't matter. It's better to be interesting next time..." Kato Hui didn't refuse Yusheng's apology, but put forward his request with a faint smile.

"Don't worry, I will write the best story, write the story that people like Hui at a glance, and let Hui become the best heroine!" in the face of such considerate Kato Hui, Yusheng was deeply moved and couldn't help making an agreement with each other directly.

"Wang Jun..." in the face of Yusheng's oath, Kato Hui didn't know whether Yusheng included some of his own thoughts. For a moment, he also felt a little complicated.

One side of the mountain fairy smelled that the speech was even more delicious. She couldn't help scolding Yusheng in her heart‘ If people help you find your mistakes and give you advice, don't you know and thank me? "

Shiyu of xiazhiqiu seems more straightforward than the mountain goblin. He directly interrupts the interaction between Yusheng and Kato Hui and asks aloud.

"Then, Mr. Yusheng, what are you going to write next?"