Chapter 784

"Hmm? How about?" Yusheng, who has been paying attention to Kato Hui's expression, immediately raised his heart after discovering that Kato Hui's face has become a little delicate. He asked Kato Hui about her feelings with some expectation and some worry.

"Well... Feel good..." for Yusheng's question, Kato Hui immediately adjusted her expression, put on a gentle smiling face and responded to Yusheng with a smile. However, no matter how Kato Hui pretends, as she doesn't have much expression change at ordinary times, the reluctant color on her face makes Yusheng see it all at once.

So after seeing through Kato Huina's white lie, Yusheng inexplicably felt a little flustered and confused. He even asked Kato Hui about it and wanted to know Kato Hui's specific views.

"Well, what's more specific? For example, what do you think is good and what can be improved."

"Well... In this case... I don't know how to comment on this kind of thing..." Kato Hui was very embarrassed about Yusheng's requirements. After perfunctory words, he turned to one side, Shantian goblin and xiazhiqiu Shiyu, hoping Yusheng could find a more professional person to get a more formal evaluation.

However, Yamada goblin and xiazhiqiu Shiyu have long been attracted by the interaction between Yusheng and Kato Hui. Especially after discovering the embarrassment on Kato Hui's face, they have some guesses in their hearts. Now, seeing that Kato Hui seemed to drag herself into the water, Yamada goblin and xiazhiqiu Shiyu couldn't help laughing and said.

"Sister Kato, just say something. Talk about your most direct feelings. Think whether Yusheng's writing is interesting and where it attracts you."

Compared with the relatively polite words of Yamada goblins, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's words are very direct and rough. "If you can't do anything, just say it. There's no need to take care of Yu Shengjun's face. He's not a three-year-old. How's his script? Can he count 13 in his heart? So you're welcome whether it's good or bad."

Listening to Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, it was almost to let Kato Hui directly say that he was badly written. Yusheng couldn't help laughing bitterly, and then looked at Kato Hui with some uneasiness. To be honest, because of Kato Hui's reaction after reading the steps, Yusheng himself also recalled what he had written, and found that it was indeed somewhat unsatisfactory. In desperation, Yusheng had to nod to Kato Hui and signal the other party to be free.

"Well... Then I'll say..." under everyone's gaze, Kato Hui also felt a pressure. In desperation, she had to harden her head and look at the script on the computer. "In fact, I don't know how to look at the game script. Now I look at Wang Jun's script, I feel that it's still interesting. I think it needs to be strengthened a little."

After hearing Kato Hui's evaluation, Yusheng helplessly looked at the ceiling. Because Kato's evaluation, from a certain point of view, actually means that Yusheng's script is very boring. However, for this result, Yusheng doesn't want to be like this, but according to his contact with Kato Hui in his daily life, the script on the computer is the most interesting script written by Yusheng according to Kato Hui's usual temperament.

However, to the greatest extent, even Kato Hui himself could not agree. Under the circumstances, Yusheng could not help feeling some loss and some distress.

"HMM... can you show us?" because they have to be busy with their respective work, Shantian goblin and Xiazhi Qiu Shiyu haven't had time to check each other's scripts recently, so they haven't seen the scripts just made by Yusheng's computer.

They are just a little tired of coding, so they can take the opportunity to relax and find out what boring things Yusheng has done.

So the two girls, a freshman and a junior, just asked politely, and took Yusheng's computer. Then the two heads came together and looked at Yusheng's script with professional eyes.

"HMM... what do you think?" seeing the two girls become a little strange after checking the script, I don't know if they are laughing, Yusheng's heart raised a little hope. After all, Kato said he didn't understand the game script. How to look at it is more appropriate. If you change to two relatively professional people, you may have a different view.

"Thirty, out of a hundred."

"Bad comments!"

Then the two girls did not take into account Yusheng's "fragile" heart at all, and mercilessly gave a very bad evaluation, which immediately hit Yusheng badly. Kei Kato, who was on the side, was a little embarrassed and comforted Yusheng.

"It doesn't matter. If it's not good, just revise it again. There's still time anyway. And I personally think Wang Jun's writing is OK. Maybe the goblin and Shiyu are more strict."

Kato Hui felt that if he didn't have to see his part of the script, Yusheng would not be criticized by Yamada goblin and Xiazhi Qiu Shiyu in front of everyone. Although this kind of thing is actually going to happen sooner or later, it can't stop Kato Hui's heart from feeling a trace of guilt for Yusheng. And Yusheng felt a little better because of Kato's comfort.

Unfortunately, Yusheng just felt a little better. Shantian goblin and xiazhiqiu Shiyu ruthlessly trampled on Yusheng's slightly better fragile heart and ran over it for several times.

"Yu Shengjun, your steps are not bad, but very bad. If you hadn't written the script of Yuban Meiqin before, I can't believe you wrote it? Although the overall language is very beautiful and the words and sentences are very helpful, from the content, it's empty. Yu Shengjun." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu pointed to the document on the computer screen and said impolitely, which made Yusheng feel very ashamed and embarrassed to lower his head.

And this is not over. Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said a lot of words. In the gap of taking a breath and taking a rest, Yamada goblin took the stick criticizing Yusheng and continued to talk.

"Yu Shengjun, you are very boring. The bridges inside are very old-fashioned and have been used rotten. Of course, it doesn't mean that you can't use those bridges, but you make them a little new or interesting. And you see..."

Speaking of half, Yamada goblin also specially found an example in the document, turned the computer to Yusheng and said, "look at your sister Kato, what's the reaction?"

"HMM... what's wrong with this?" Yusheng looked at the contents of the computer along the words of Yamada goblin. However, after reading it for a while, Yusheng thought and thought that he had written nothing wrong. After all, according to his understanding of Kato Hui, when he met the bridge section designed by himself, he wrote it quite in line with the reality.

"What's the matter?" but Yamada goblin was very dissatisfied when he heard Yusheng's answer. "Are you still a light fiction writer? Your sister Kato's response is not interesting at all. Is sister Kato such a boring person in your heart?"

"That..." as soon as Yamada goblin's voice fell, Kato Hui raised his hand embarrassed and attracted everyone's attention.

"In fact, if I really encounter something like that in the script, my response should be similar to what Wang Jun wrote..."