Author's Opinion
Hi there! I am the author, and I am here to discuss some relevant points that can affect this story.
First, I want to say that this chapter can be helpful for any reader who has been interested in the idea of ??the story and wants to know a little more before deciding whether to start this reading.
So, I'm going to talk about some points that I believe are necessary for a fantasy story like mine. Anyway, let's get down to business.N0v3lTr0ve served as the original host for this chapter's release on N0v3l--B1n.
(Don't mind the order. It's not necessarily the most important thing or anything. It's just random.)
1- Relations / Harem: Like many authors here on this site, I am also a reader. And that kind of relationship, at least in many of the works I read, follows a path that significantly disappoints me.
I wouldn't say I like to follow stories where the MC picks up a bunch of random wives along the way, abandoning them almost instantly after a brief contact, leaving, or forgetting them until nearly the end of the story.
Also, I'm not too fond of that almost all beautiful women in the story fall in love with the MC or that the MC wants to marry nearly every woman he touches. Anyway, don't expect anything like this in this story.
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I, as a reader, really like to see certain characters. That is why story planning should be done to prevent this type of situation from happening. Sometimes, there is nothing more rewarding than seeing certain characters...
4- MC development: another issue closely related to the previous one. Sometimes I see MCs saying they care about those related to him, friends, companions, and family. Still, all I see are individuals who don't seem to have much gratitude or a sense of responsibility.
The guy enters a sect, gets stronger, and sometimes receives excellent support from those places, and then there comes the point where he leaves and doesn't look back...
And look, in many of these stories, talent is almost worthless since the external resources will make the main characters so strong...
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So, why not help the one who welcomed you when you were weak? Sometimes they even return, almost at the end of the story, when the authors no longer want to spend a lot of time on these texts... This ends up not being satisfactory when I see it in my readings.
Anyway, these are some of my opinions about what should be in a novel. I'm just an amateur writer who decided to start writing his own story after reaching his share of disappointments in the texts I read.
While I write, I will try to avoid making the same mistakes as my predecessors, but you know how it's, right? I'm just a human... Oh! English isn't my first language, so there may be some problems with the grammar...