Chapter 345： Continue to save the script

The line of screenwriting has developed for so many years, and it is also very mature.

In Hollywood, many producers have entire writing teams under their command.

The most famous one is Jerry Bruckheimer. This fellow has such a good vision, and there are so many screenwriters, especially good at series.

Every time this guy has a new idea, he will gather a bunch of screenwriter talents and hold a meeting to discuss it.

What three paragraphs, lines, characters, etc., the entire book is subdivided from the inside out.

For example, in a script, let a certain group start and set the whole tone.

Another dedicated team will ponder character characterization and set conflict points, and then there are other screenwriters who write the required scenes. For example, this one has a very delicate description of emotions, so let this person write about the emotional transformation of the male and female protagonists, such as this one who is good at fighting. , then write the fight scenes.

In short, relying on this professionalism and fluidity, it may have been just a whim of Jerry Bruckheimer at first, but it can also be abruptly compiled into a mature script, full of commerciality.

As for Jonathan, he has the strength in this area, and is especially good at making a final decision among a bunch of ideas.

In other words, he has a great sense of what the audience wants to see and likes to see.

In the cigar room, which is already a fairyland, everyone is full of excitement.

The idea just now was immediately agreed.

Lyman smiled and said: "If you want to give Batman more humanity, you have to pull him off the altar. You said, setting him to a higher force value than ordinary people will cause injuries and death. , how about mortals who are afraid and hesitate?"

"Good idea." Nolan nodded decisively, "This is what I want."

He got up slightly and said seriously: "The original intention of my writing this story is that because Gotham is full of crimes, the judiciary and the government do nothing, people expect a hero to protect them. Batman is this hero, but he is also a hero. Mortal, this is a story of a weak person who has gone through a series of incidents and dares to draw a sword to help when he sees injustice."

The more he talked, the brighter his eyes became, as if the whole thought was opened.

It turns out that everything that is troubled and puzzled has an answer.

He said: Why is there Batman, because even if your family is rich, you may die once, under a black gun deep in the alley, just because you have money;

Why there is Batman, because everyone endures in the dark, praying for God's redemption, but God never loves the world, there is a person who speaks out in silence, he stands up, and the person who stands up becomes Batman;

Why is there a Batman? It's not Kaylaf's body armor, it's not the Batmobile, it's not that cool jacket, it's a choice.

Lehman was also deeply touched by the words.

He finally understood why Nolan made such a story.

Or if it wasn't in the name of Batman, he was a hero.

It's also why Batman would suit him.

His story is not false.

In other words, in his understanding, a superhero should not be a person with great strength, but a person who only does 200 push-ups more than ordinary people. He can have a firm belief and a heart to uphold justice, which is far better than Nothing is more touching.

The body of a mortal is comparable to that of a god.

......

The general tone of the whole story is set.

Lehman suggested: "Today is also a fate. Several talented people gather together. If you have intentions, we will directly set the frame of the movie for it. Warners are still waiting for it. Mr. Jonathan, I will trouble you to write the script. , to complete the first version of the script as soon as possible."

The cigar smoked comfortably, and the man had the right taste.

Jonathan nodded cheerfully: "Don't worry, I promise not to delay things."

Ryan has also been smoking a cigar in small sips, listening to it, completely aroused by the story, and said happily: "Come on, I can also help and give some creativity or something."

"..."

Jonathan put down his cigar and said, "The whole idea of ​​the adaptation is here. The development of the protagonist Batman is generally clear, but the plot is not enough, and the character conflicts have not yet been decided. Should we talk about the plot arrangement first, or think about the characters first? set up?"

"Characters, with characters, there is a story, and the plot can unfold naturally. I'll start with..."

Lehman paused and said, "There is definitely a need for a villain, a villain, or something like a finale, but what is the purpose of the villain? What about those who are destroying the order of Gotham more and more? Gang leader, perverted drug lord scarecrow."

"Yes, the scarecrow can also lead to Arkham Asylum, which is an element of the Batman comics. But what about the justice side, Gordon, the police chief of Gotham City, and the prosecutor. Set the prosecutor as It's Bruce Wayne's childhood sweetheart, and the ambiguous emotional part can also amplify Batman's humanity." Ryan also said hi.

"Emotional scenes are okay, but they can't be deliberately set. How about setting them up as like-minded people? They have good feelings for each other, but they haven't been formally established?" Lehman said again.

"Alright, anyway, the main line of the story revolves around the growth of Bruce Wayne." Nolan also smiled: "His fighting skills are set to be learned from a master, and in the end, the master is inconsistent with his philosophy, There is a dispute between the two.”

Jonathan also suggested: "This story must be a sequel If you want to create a complete Batman, the first one can only slowly change in this direction, Gotham is also, it is a slowly A city of destroyed order."

"Then this dramatic conflict is all out..." Nolan sighed: "Some criminals in the city represent internal stubborn diseases. The transformation of Bruce Wayne is the main line, as well as experience and thinking. It's a wonderful story."

"Awesome. The part of learning martial arts is very good, it shows that Bruce Wayne became Batman by himself. Even without the help of those technologies, he would still be a chivalrous person who punishes evil and promotes good." Lyman gave a thumbs up , "However, I think it's a little more interesting. You can set the person who teaches him fighting skills and the leader of the organization. He is also the big boss in the first part, which gives the audience a great sense of refreshment."

"Organization means strong strength and rules. It can also be said that Bruce Wayne is unwilling to abide by the rules of the organization, and he acts differently, so he will turn against each other in the end. In this way, the conflict can be stronger." Jonathan pondered.

"It makes sense. In this way, there will be a climax segment, and the audience will be more satisfied. Otherwise, the tone of the whole film will be very bland, which is not conducive to commercialization and entertainment." Ryan also said.

"Well, that's it. Various main characters plus some settings in the comics, there can be eight or nine characters, what's the matter, the characters are also satisfied."

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