Chapter 1472

Luo qingluan pointed out their shortcomings and their advantages, which made them feel that what they did was not bad. They were very happy to hear the praise, remembered the key points Luo qingluan said, and were ready to continue their efforts after going back.

"Well, let's keep going." Luo qingluan encouraged them and didn't suppress them as soon as they came up, otherwise these people would soon give up. At that time, let alone three months, Su Yi would have a headache if she couldn't train them in three years.

"Next, imperial concubine Zhen and imperial concubine Yun, let's tell you your story." Luo qingluan finally accepted their tasks.

I don't know why, Luo qingluan intuitively felt that they would win the two editor's posts together. If so, just one is in charge of the palace and the other is in charge of the outside of the palace.

"Then I'll come first." Princess Yun stood up timidly.

"Good!" Luo qingluan applauded her, "finally someone took the initiative to stand up."

Courage is commendable! Luo qingluan praised her.

"After all, the last class was also simple for me to tell and write stories. As a result, I didn't make them up later. I was too proud and conceited. Here I apologize to you first." Princess Yun gave everyone a sorry salute and then said.

"After these three days of creation, I know how difficult it is to write a wonderful and good-looking story. After a long time of deliberation and editing, it should be logical, let children like it, not only tell stories, but also express the truth of life we want to pass on to children through stories. It is very difficult to do these things alone, so this time The story I wrote is not particularly brilliant. I'm going to make a fool of you here. "

"OK." Su Yi cheered Princess Yun, "Princess Yun has the courage to accept the challenge. This palace admires her. Let's applaud her!"

"Thank you, sisters." Princess Yun was a little embarrassed to accept everyone's applause.

"Well, let's go." Su Yi enters the theme.

"OK." Princess Yun took a few deep breaths, then picked up the rice paper with the story and read it.

"One day, a snail and an ant met. They came to the bottom of a mountain at the same time. The ant asked the snail," where are you going? " The snail replied, "I want to climb to the top of the highest mountain and see the scenery of nature."

The ant said, "I advise you not to go. We've just come down from there. We're too tired and far away, and there's nothing beautiful on it." After hearing this, the snail said, "maybe, but I still want to go up and have a look."

The ant said again, "brother snail, you'd better not go. There's really nothing beautiful on it. It's estimated that you can't reach the top of the mountain in a year if you climb so slowly."

The snail smiled and said, "thank you, brother ant. I know your kindness, but I still want to see it. Although I climb slowly, I can climb slowly."

The ant discouraged again and again: "do you know it's going to be winter now? If you don't climb the mountain, you will be submerged by the heavy snow. Brother, why don't you come back next year?" The snail still insists on doing what is right now.

Seeing that the advice was invalid, the ants had to shake their heads and leave in groups. The snail crawls slowly with its shell on its back. It crawls very slowly, but it is also very stable. After unremitting efforts, the snail finally climbed to the top of the highest mountain before the heavy snow, and saw the snow scenery below.

When he was on his way home, many insect friends came to ask him how he did it. The snail replied:

"Nothing. I just wanted to finish one thing, so I did it."

Princess Yun finished the story. Luo qingluan nodded with satisfaction.

"Good..."

"Yes, it's quite interesting."

"The snail climbs slowly and the ant climbs fast, just like the tortoise and the little rabbit. In the end, those who stick to the end win, and those who give up halfway fail."

"Yes, yes, that's good."

Everyone praised Princess Yun's writing. After all, this is the first time to create. It's quite good to be able to create such a level

"The palace also thinks it's OK. What does Princess Chu think?" Su Yi also nodded and praised, and couldn't help but look at Princess Yun with new eyes.

"It's really good. The story fully reflects the feelings you want to express, and can also make children clearly aware that as long as they persevere, they can achieve their goals!"

Luo qingluan praised a person in public for the first time. Princess Yun was praised by Luo qingluan for the first time, and the whole music blossomed.

"Thank Princess Chu for her praise!"

"Well, Princess Yun can. She has talent. After practicing for a while, she can be the editor in chief." Luo qingluan looks after her. Making up a story is logical. Although it is a short story, there are basic elements. It seems that it has used heart.

"Good! I will practice hard and live up to the cultivation of the queen and the princess of Chu." Princess Yun was very happy. Her three days of efforts were not in vain.

With the recognition of Luo qingluan and Su Yi, Princess Yun is happier than anything.

"Then should we see what Princess Zhen wrote next?"

"Yes, why did Princess Zhen stop talking all the time? Didn't she write it out?"

"A few days ago, I was still in an air. Now I am silent and dare not speak."

"Ah, don't say that. I think concubine Zhen is locked up in the house these days. The girls in the yard say they are buried in creation. Don't underestimate people. Maybe concubine Zhen writes better than concubine Yun? It's just that she has no confidence for the first time."

"Yes, yes, I seem to have seen it, too."

Everyone was talking. Princess Zhen's hand was clenched. In fact, she was a little nervous.

"What do you say, Princess Zhen? Has the story been written?" Luo qingluan asked directly.

A few days ago, she did see that imperial concubine Zhen was a little against imperial concubine Yun. It is estimated that it is also the first time for everyone. She also wants to show herself. Luo qingluan can see that imperial concubine Zhen's strength should be above imperial concubine Yun.

But if it's a mule or a horse, you still have to pull it out for a walk.

"Yes, Princess Zhen, you haven't spoken all the time, which makes the palace a little nervous. Whether you have written or not, we are all waiting to listen." Queen Su Yi also hung her heart in her throat.

"I..." Princess Zhen was really a little nervous. "I wrote it, but I didn't have confidence. This is the first time I learned to write a story. I also wanted to write it well, but I didn't have experience. I just extracted some key points according to the stories in the twenty color painting books and drew a gourd and wrote one."

"Oh, that's OK. Princess Yun also wrote the story of ants and snails according to the version of the tortoise rabbit race. We all want to see your story? Read it to everyone quickly. We can't wait." Queen Suyi opened for her.

"Everyone cheer for Princess Zhen." She took the lead in clapping and cheering.

"Come on, Princess Zhen! Let's watch

You! When it's written, we'll be the editor in chief together. We all rely on you and Princess Yun. "

"Yes, come on."

Everyone encouraged her, and Luo qingluan also encouraged her.

"It doesn't matter. You won't laugh at what you write. Just contact more. I don't ask you to take shape at one time. Everyone has the first time. As long as you dare to accept the challenge, everything else is not a problem."

That's all Luo qingluan can say. In fact, how she writes is the first time. She doesn't ask much. She just hopes that they can make efforts to write stories and face them as an important thing,

Whether it is perfunctory or not, just listen to the story.

"OK, I'll read it to you."

"Wow!" Let's applaud.

"Once upon a time, two wolves moved quietly in the woods at night. One day, they caught a sheep drinking water by the river. Both wolves wanted to swallow the sheep alone, so they quarreled.

At this time, the sheep thought and said, "if you want to kill, don't make a noise. I'll wake up my mother later."

The two wolves looked at the lamb in front of them and thought of the ewe in the house. Subconsciously, they rushed into the house to catch the mother sheep. At this time, the lamb followed and locked the door at the moment when the two wolves rushed into the house.

The two wolves didn't find the mother sheep at all. When they saw the closed door, they realized that they had been tricked. The lamb shouted to the house, "two bad wolves, let you bully me. Wait. I'll go to the big dog to clean you up."

The two wolves were paralyzed by fear and said repeatedly, "it's over, cheated..." Princess Zhen roughly read her story. Luo qingluan listened and it was OK.

"It seems pretty good. It's also simple and easy to understand."

"Yes, it's OK to write. Although it's not as wonderful as Princess Yun, it's also a complete story."

"It seems that both of them can play the main role of editor in chief at the same time."

After hearing this, the queen found that the ability of Princess Zhen to make up stories was not bad: "it's good to tell. Don't worry about anything. You can save your life at the critical moment."

"Yes, yes, it's an interesting story. Princess Zhenfei is good! We support you."

Everyone supports imperial concubine Yun and imperial concubine Zhen. Now it seems that it is certain that they will succeed the chief editor. After all, they have learned at least a story, but they can't write a word.

"Zhenfei, you are very talented. Why don't you have confidence? The Zhenfei I met a few days ago is not so indecisive. The Zhenfei I know should have more courage and accept more challenges than now."

Luo qingluan didn't think there was anything wrong with the story of Princess Zhen, but she didn't have confidence, mainly because she was trained by Luo qingluan a few days ago.

"Well, after studying for three days, my concubine found that the simpler things on the surface are, the more difficult they are. According to our thinking, in fact, children's acceptance ability is limited. Originally, I wrote several stories, all of which are longer than this, but later I thought, it's too long. Maybe children can't see it at all. What they need is simple things. It's best to tell them at a glance What you want to express.

I also wrote this story for myself, mainly because I was too proud and offended the princess a few days ago. My concubine is here to apologize to all sisters and princess! "