Chapter 433

If you want the readers to trust you, it's because of fate. Since the readers choose you from the vast ocean of information, you must give them extra value in return, which is the basis of building trust.

Even if the final change of the article is general, but at least you can have a clear conscience, because you have tried your best.

After the initial revision, we can ensure that there are no major problems. This time you can see if there is room for optimization in terms of words and sentences, whether the words are easy to understand, whether there is a sense of substitution at the beginning, whether the title can be further optimized, and so on. "

Wang Xiaochen quickly said: "I'll go through tonight and write out the revised plan. I'll see how to do it tomorrow."

Fang Tianxing said to him, "yes, but we must keep the good parts and get rid of the bad ones. And we can make the main line more prominent, and the context of development more clear.... "

Wang Xiaochen quickly said, "I'll do it well and be responsible for my work."

When Fang Tianxing went back to class, the students talked about what Fang Tianxing had done. Many people thought that Fang Tianxing had broken the rules of the perfect university and was a provocation to the authority.

Fang Tianxing's gambling fight a week later is a joke. A top student who works hard in perfect university can't compete with a poor student who is eliminated. Many people think that he is just beyond his ability. Fang Tianxing doesn't know if he can doubt these people. He just expects reality to shut them up.

After class, Tianxing comes to Wang Xiaochen, who has sorted out all his works.

The places to be modified are marked out. Fang Tianxing checks them one by one and gives his own modification opinions for each place.

Wang Xiaochen found that the points pointed out by Fang Tianxing were all his previous weaknesses, but he didn't expect Fang Tianxing to point out all of a sudden, which surprised him very much,

Fang Tianxing said to him: "a text is a literary work only if it is read by readers in the world, because their opinions represent the so-called will of the world, and those who read your works are all people in the world after all. If you intend to ignore the world, the world will also ignore you.

Many problems, such as the back against the white wall, obviously stained with dust, they are difficult to find, but others can easily see.

For the problems pointed out by others, there is a principle of revision, that is, we must join our own thinking, not blindly cater to others.

However, thinking is indeed a very painful thing, even one of the heaviest burdens of human beings. Since it's so painful, why should we think about it? Because thinking is what makes us different from other animals.

Wang Xiaochen listened carefully to Fang Tianxing's opinions. Today, Fang Tianxing told him about the composition and plot structure.

After hearing this, he felt that his writing had just been enriched and his writing had become more exquisite.

Fang Tianxing said to him, "knowledge must be used in order to play its role. We must work hard to find the best way to write in codewords."

Wang Xiaochen has finished writing 10000 words today, but he knows that this is not enough. If he wants to be an excellent Internet author, he has to burn himself to the limit and bloom with unprecedented brilliance.

According to Fang Tianxing's instruction, Wang Xiaochen only felt that his coded words were becoming more and more exquisite. Compared with the earth shaking changes before, it was almost impossible to compare them with each other.

Fang Tianxing thinks that Wang Xiaochen will be a blockbuster. The time he wasted before is not in vain. Instead, he is accumulating. Once it breaks out, his achievements will be higher than most Internet authors.

There are many ways to achieve the goal. Some people choose what seems easy, while others choose what seems difficult. But in the end, they all go the same way.

Those who take the seemingly difficult road are doomed to suffer in the early stage, but the road behind will become easier and easier. Those who take the seemingly easy road will find the road narrower and narrower in the back.

The advantage taken by the front will be returned to the back. The significance of suffering in the front will also be revealed in the back.

The peak of a lot of people who claim to be gifted in their life is when they are young. When they are young, they take advantage of their high starting point, but in the later stage, they become mediocre and no longer have the capital to be proud of themselves.

But some people are not impressive in the early stage, but in the late stage, they really shine, showing unprecedented brilliance.

Network author all the way, only to the end is the winner, but for many people, the future is invisible, no one will feel that their future will be worse than others, it is impossible to feel that they will lose to others.

Wang Xiaochen continued to code words. He spent the whole day in coding words. He combed all the previous plots and corrected the deficiencies.

He didn't forget the daily updates. Directly, Wang Xiaochen didn't feel tired at all. Instead, he felt full of fighting spirit and his accumulated enthusiasm burst out.

Soon, readers also brought a lot of positive feedback. At first, some readers were willing to support Wang Xiaochen, leaving a message for him to pay attention to his body and make him feel more excited.

Just a small comment has already made Wang Xiaochen very excited. It hasn't appeared for a long time. Wang Xiaochen has been fed up with the feeling that no one cares. Even a little care is enough to make him excited.

The world is so unfair, those famous authors are more favored by readers, with the accumulation of popularity, can easily reach the level that ordinary authors can not imagine.

In the face of these, many ordinary writers can only be greedy, the pursuit is to want to get these, some people are willing to cheer for themselves, just once in a lifetime is enough.

Wang Xiaochen is full of vitality and continues to work without any fatigue.

Soon a week passed, and on the day when Fang Tianxing made an appointment with the headmaster Xie Yue, everything was ready. Fang Tianxing appeared with Wang Xiaochen. Today, he will face the challenges of all freshmen. If you win, you can enter the perfect university again. If you lose, you can only leave the perfect university without any chance.

Wang Xiaochen clenched his fist. He told himself that he couldn't lose. Soon Xie Yue announced the challenge rules. Many freshmen rubbed their hands to let him know that heaven is high and earth is good. Don't be paranoid.

Li Anping, who beat Wang Xiaochen in the knockout, had to leave the perfect university.

"I've been able to beat you once before, and this time you'll still be defeated by me." Li Anping said triumphantly.

"Go up and convince those who look down on you." Fang Tianxing said to Wang Xiaochen.

Wang Xiaochen nodded and quickly stepped into the challenge arena. Facing Li Anping's challenge, he was not afraid. He said directly to Li Anping, "I lost to you before, but I won't lose again this time."