Chapter 1431

"Come on, let's listen." Zhang Zhixing put on an indomitable look.

Fang Yun sighed gently and opened his mouth slowly. They thought he was going to say a word of criticism and wanted to see how Yan Yukong reacted.

"I have to say that there are some defects in this poem, that is, this is the Spring Festival literature meeting, but his poem is like welcoming the spring, inappropriate and flawed!"

As soon as Fang Yun finished, laughter broke out one after another, and Yan Yukong laughed the most happily.

Zhang Zhixing said angrily, "where is it to pick a mistake? It's completely perfunctory! The title of this poem is' spring ', not' sending spring ', and sending spring is a literary meeting, not a poem title. You should seriously say the shortcomings of this poem, otherwise it's tantamount to contempt for this meeting!"

"Yes, it's too contemptuous of our old students. No, we must criticize!"

"We must make a heavy mouth. This so-called defect is just a scratch!"

Even some new students feel that Fang Yun is safeguarding Yan Yukong.

Fang Yun was embarrassed and said, "it's not good to do so. I've picked out the defects and can't continue to pick. Zhang Zhixing, you cover up the sky at the cultural meeting. Be careful that I report to the gentlemen of Chongwen academy!"

"Complain? It's up to you, but before you complain, you must pick out Yan Yukong's fault for me!" Zhang Zhixing was confident.

The people felt more and more interesting. The old student forced Xu Sheng to this son, which could not be seen in the future, so they coaxed and asked Fang Yun not to avoid the important and take the light, but to give an explanation to the Wen Hui.

Even some new students followed, and the atmosphere was very lively, which was more in line with the purpose of the cultural conference. Everyone came to play. They didn't put on airs, and they wanted to have fun.

Fang Yun shook his head helplessly and said, "there's no way. It's no wonder I said it!"

"Speak quickly!" Zhang Zhixing smiled.

The laughter faded away, and the crowd looked at Fang Yun.

Fang Yun coughed softly and said: "The poem itself is not flawed. The problem is that if you are not afraid of not knowing the goods, you are afraid of comparing the goods. The first two sentences are 'the spring pond is full of spring water, and the spring grass grows in spring', which can be regarded as a good sentence, simple, specific and vivid. But the first sentence is a little poor. The spring water is good, even the spring pond is good, but when the two are connected together, they are a little redundant and close The key is much different from the following sentence. If it is replaced by "spring comes, the spring pond is full", it not only echoes with the following "spring time". As the beginning of the whole poem, "spring comes" comes straight to the point and goes straight into the poetic realm, but also shows its ability in words and sentences. Although the word "Lai" is not flat, it can also be replaced by the words "to", "warm" and so on. "

Many students nodded gently. The spring grass was very natural in spring. When the spring pool was full, it seemed too deliberate, and Fang Yun's change was obviously better.

Yan Yukong smiled and nodded. He knew he was in a hurry and didn't think about it carefully, otherwise it wouldn't be so. Fang Yun only saw the problem in a few seconds. Obviously, he had a deep foundation.

"One is not enough, say another!" someone shouted.

Fang Yun looked at the man with a smile. The student of the holy Academy was at least well-known in various countries. He soon recognized him. His name was Ning Meng. He was from Qingguo. He didn't have a deep relationship with his friends. He was the nephew of a Qingguo Chamberlain. The Qingguo Chamberlain blamed himself in the Qingguo court.

Fang Yun said with a smile, "I only see this flaw. I think you must see many flaws in Yu Kong's new poetry. Come on, please stand up and criticize and let me learn."

Ning Meng was stunned and motionless.

Many people looked at Ning Meng with a smile. It's ok if their friends tossed around. If they are not familiar with Fang Yun and want to continue to force Fang Yun to pick mistakes for their friends, don't blame Fang Yun for fighting back. What's more, this cultural meeting is just fun. Fang Yun's doing this is just in line with the theme of this cultural meeting.

Zhang Zhixing smiled and said, "if you think this poem is inappropriate, you can stand up and talk about it."

Ning Mengjiang sat there and secretly said that Fang Xusheng was powerful. He smiled and said, "don't dare, I'll make fun of you. I can't talk about poetry better than Fang Xusheng. Don't say it."

As soon as Fang Yun saw that the man was soft, he would no longer say anything. If he continued to fight back, the other party pretended to be wronged and admitted his mistake again. It's nothing to retreat for progress, but it's too boring to make the atmosphere of the meeting completely dull. He should master this measure.

Fang Yun smiled and drank a mouthful of spring wine. They understood that Fang Yun didn't want to be stiff at the cultural meeting, so they didn't coax again. Yan Yukong is a semi holy child after all. So far, playing can't evolve into an attack.

"After reading Yan Yukong's, look at the other nine people at his table." Zhang Zhixing said, taking out the poems of the other nine people and reading them one by one.

Soon, they found that Fang Yun's words "not afraid to compare goods without knowing goods" were also very appropriate here. It was also a hasty work. Yan Yukong's poem was obviously better than others.

The meeting continued. Zhang Zhixing and sun Renbing successively caught five tables of people. Some of them made one or two wonderful sentences, and some had a slightly strange format, but the level was only fair. It was difficult to make brilliant works. After all, they were improvised poems.

After ordering the names of the five tables, Zhang Zhixing said to have a rest. First, eat and drink to nourish the spirit. After eating and drinking, he will take away all the poems. Finally, ten old students will quickly select which ten are the worst, and then select the ten best, give rewards, and enter tomorrow's Infinite War hall as soon as those famous Bachelors or scholars.

Fang Yun, like others, is ready to eat.

Duan Qing, with a cheerful personality, stood up and said with a smile: "they are all scholars. I can't dirty the paper when eating. I'll put the paper away first and send it to you after eating."

"Thank you, brother Duan!" everyone thought he was considerate. They successively handed Duan Qing the four treasures of study in front of them and asked Duan Qing to put them aside.

Duan Qing received everyone's paper and looked at everyone's poems. He found that several people had not finished writing, and Fang Yun only wrote ten words.

Some hot dishes were served one after another. People chatted while eating and drinking, and the adjacent tables would toast. The atmosphere of the cultural meeting became more and more active.

Fang Yun then understood why he had to disturb the order of the people. After such a cultural meeting, the people at the same table had a friendship. If anyone wants to continue to get acquainted, it is natural. If anyone wants to find another person, he also has an excuse to strengthen communication between students, which is of great benefit.

A quarter of an hour later, before the meal was finished, Fang Yun received a letter from the holy courtyard.

Fang Yun stretched out his hand and took out his official seal. It turned out that the war hall was going to hold an old cabinet meeting. There were two topics. One was how to make the army of Kong Shengwen community cooperate with liangjieshan. The second was to discuss how to defend against the barbarian attack. The second topic mainly discussed the participation of the Sihai dragon family. The Sihai dragon family was exchanged for the real dragon order by Fang Yun. Fang Yun needs to be informed of any planned action.

Fang Yun saw that it was such an important meeting that he could not delay. He first said a few words to his deskmate, then quickly walked to Zhang Zhixing, whispered the reason for leaving, and finally walked out of Changhong hospital.

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