Chapter 671

At about 11 a.m. on August 26, in front of the computer in the study on the second floor of No. 47, Shimao lakeside garden, Lu Yang was thoughtful. On the computer screen in front of him was a document full of words.

His hands hit the keyboard several times from time to time, and sometimes he moved the mouse. With his operation, some words in the document were deleted, but one or two sentences were added in some places.

Occasionally, he will delete the whole paragraph.

The title at the top of the document is "thirty-three days of lovelorn".

A few days ago, Lu Yang contacted five well-known female writers in the online literary world and asked them to write a love story script called "thirty-three days of lovelorn".

At the same time, Liu Xiahui's "people in the embarrassing way" was invited.

Compared with Liu Xiahui's rapid completion, the female author wrote the story much slower. The fifth manuscript was not handed over to Lu Yang until the night before yesterday.

The names of the five manuscripts are the same, but the contents of the stories are different, just like the propositional compositions written by teachers in students' time, and the stories written by different people are all kinds.

Lu Yang read all five manuscripts one or two times.

From the perspective of writing, the female author's words don't make him read very smoothly. Perhaps it is the reason why women's feelings are more delicate. The female author's words describe many details, have a lot of pen and ink, and the habit of choosing words and sentences is also different from the male author. In short, Lu Yang won't choose the works of these female authors if he just wants to relax in reading online articles.

But after reading the five manuscripts, from the perspective of story, the quality of these five manuscripts is worthy of the great reputation of the five female authors, and there are indeed outstanding points.

The first story is about a girl's different life in 33 years after she was lovelorn. The female author of this starting point lists the whole story in a pictorial way, listing different life fragments in 33 days, from decadence after lovelorn to gradual peace of mind, to restoration of positive sunshine, and finally regained a beautiful love.

The brilliance of this story lies in the ingenuity of regaining love in the last paragraph. Lu Yang doesn't know whether the female author intends to write all the previous plots in a proper way, so as to set off the highlights of the last plot.

In short, the last love story brightened his eyes.

The second story uses a lot of narration and flashback techniques. It seems that through the memories of the past, it is intended to analyze the just ended love, and then realize that the man who broke up with her is not worth her to love, so as to get out of the haze of past love. At the end of the story, it is also arranged for the emergence of a mature man, which seems to imply that after the heroine gets out of the haze of previous love, A new and beautiful life is at hand.

In the third story, there is not much analysis of the love that has ended. This story adds some mystery. At the beginning of the story, the heroine left her hometown during her summer vacation. Before leaving, the heroine's grandmother took her hand and said something about 33 to the effect that the heroine had a robbery this year and told her no matter what happened, Don't give up hope. After 33, there will be nothing.

The heroine laughed it off and didn't take her grandmother's words to heart. When she went back, she told her boyfriend about it as a joke.

But unexpectedly, before long, her boyfriend broke up with her. The day of breaking up happened to be March 3, 3:03 p.m. when she noticed the date and time, the heroine was stunned.

After thinking about it, I finally decided to go back to my hometown and ask grandma carefully. At this time, the news of grandma's death came.

The clue seemed to break all at once.

……

The five plays have different stories.

But each story has a bright spot. Maybe the five female authors are really strong, or the five female authors. They know that this story is likely to be moved to the big screen by Lu Yang. For them, it is a great opportunity to be famous, so they all use their mind.

However, the quality of these stories is above the standard, which is good for Lu Yang.

Lu Yang thought for a long time before he made up his mind how to integrate the five stories together to form a new story.

Before the merger, Lu Yang greeted the five female authors one by one. After all, it involves copyright. Although he paid for the five scripts, he still needs the consent of the original author to change other people's stories.

Fortunately, the words of the five female authors are not difficult to say. Perhaps for the sake of money, or because of Lu Yang's fame and status in the online literary circle, they all agreed.

Today, after a morning's revision, a new script has almost been revised.

The housekeeper knocked on the door of the study twice. Lu Yang said casually. The housekeeper pushed the door in and said, "Mr. Lu! Miss Yu next door came with her daughter and said she had something to find you! I'll wait in the downstairs hall now!"

"Oh?"

Lu Yang was a little surprised and became a neighbor for several months. This was the first time sister Yu came to the door. After thinking about it, Lu Yang nodded, saved almost the revised manuscript, and then got up and went downstairs.

"Sister Yu! Nannan! Rare guests! Please sit down! Have you served tea? Please serve tea! What would you like to drink, Nannan?"

Before going downstairs from the stairs, Lu Yang greeted sister Yu and Nannan with a smile.

Sister Yu is dressed in plain white home clothes and slippers. At this time, she is holding Nannan's small hand and looking at Lu Yang's villa with a smile.

Hearing Lu Yang's voice, she smiled, reached out and patted Nan Nan's small head and urged, "Nan Nan! Don't shout uncle! Do you understand politeness?"

"Hello, uncle!"

Nannan was so clever that she immediately called Lu Yang sweetly.

"Mr. Lu! Take the liberty to come and disturb you? I'm so sorry!"

After Nannan shouted to Lu Yang, sister Yu spoke to Lu Yang. As soon as she spoke, she was very polite.

Lu Yang waved his hand and said, "sister Yu is so polite! We are neighbors! It's said that distant relatives are better than close neighbors! It's my honor for sister Yu to be a guest! Please sit down, sister Yu! Nannan! You haven't said what you want to drink?"

"Uncle! I'm not thirsty!"

Nannan stood next to her mother, looked at Lu Yang with curious eyes, and looked around in the hall.

……

When the tea was served, sister Yu took a sip and told Lu Yang about her family. She said she wanted to invite Lu Yang to be a guest in the evening. The reason was very polite. She said that the two neighbors had not officially known each other for such a long time. She invited Lu Yang to dinner tonight and introduced her husband to Lu Yang. I hope the two families can take care of each other in the future.

Such a reason made people unable to refuse. Lu Yang only considered it and agreed.

Coincidentally, just after sister Yu explained her intention here, the sound of a car came from outside the villa, followed by the door bell. The housekeeper hurried to see the situation. Soon, Wang Lin strode into the villa.

Seeing that Lu Yang had guests here, Wang Lin was stunned. He politely nodded to sister Yu and just said, "Wenda! There are guests! Talk first! We'll talk about it later!"

Sister Yu took the opportunity to leave. Lu Yang asked her to stay out of politeness. She didn't change her mind. She nodded with Wang Lin and took Nan Nan away.

"Wenda! What's the situation? You won't be interested in married women now, will you?"

As soon as sister Yu and Nannan left, Wang Lin, who was used to talking with Lu Yang, joked about Lu Yang. While talking, he had sat down opposite Lu Yang, picked up the tea cup that sister Yu had just drunk, took a sip, drank it, and then asked, "didn't anyone drink this cup of tea just now?"

Lu Yanggang was still thinking, when did Wang Lin become so informal! After listening to his question, he was relieved and said with a light smile: "sister Yu drank it just now!"

With that, Lu Yang smiled at Wang Lin's expression.

Sure enough, the smile on Wang Lin's face suddenly stopped and stared at him.

"Wenda! Why didn't you say it earlier? Why didn't you stop me just now? It's too cloudy!"

"Does it smell good?"

Lu Yang asked him this question with a smile.

Wang Lin was speechless. Then he blinked and suddenly said with a smile, "it's OK! The young woman just had a good temperament! Fortunately, she wasn't a dinosaur! Otherwise I would vomit now! By the way! Wenda, you said you would give me two scripts today. Where are they?"

Speaking of business, Lu Yangcai stopped his smiling face, slightly tilted his head, motioned upstairs and said, "come with me! The second script needs to be revised again! It'll be ready soon!"

With that, Lu Yang got up and went upstairs. When Wang Lin heard that he was upstairs, he immediately got up and followed him.

Upstairs, Lu Yang asked Wang Lin to help himself. He sat back in front of the computer, picked up an e-cigarette and put it in his mouth. While looking at the script on the computer, he looked for the previous feeling. Wang Lin's interest was in him and watched him with great interest to see how he modified the manuscript.

This is probably the curiosity of all laymen about how writers write and revise manuscripts.

Lu Yang didn't care about it. He felt about the script and began to continue the previous revision. His eyes were always fixed on the computer screen and his hands were placed on the computer keyboard at will. However, every time he knocked, the text jumped out faster than Wang Lin's reading speed, making Wang Lin's eyes blink.

Not long after, Lu Yang finally hit the space bar, then saved the script with the mouse, and said, "OK!"

Without looking back at Wang Lin, he opened the desk drawer, took out a USB flash disk, copied the newly modified script and handed it to Wang Lin.

"Both scripts are in it! Thirty three days of lovelorn can be filmed later, and people in the embarrassing way should be filmed as fast as possible! By the way! I asked you to contact Xu Zheng and Wang Baoxiang. Have you contacted them?"

Wang Lin took the USB flash drive from Lu Yang and replied with a smile, "I've already found it! What's your boss's account that I haven't paid attention to? It's your script! When this script is taken to them, I should be able to sign the contract!"