Chapter 668

How to make the beginning of a tragedy fascinating and interested in continuing to read it?

I don't know how many writers have thought about this problem. At the beginning, when he decided to write the beginning of the era of teachers into the tragedy of the last battle of the popular cloud, Lu Yang didn't consider this problem and just wanted to write according to his consistent writing style.

Later, when he wrote more than 3000 words, he suddenly frowned, paused to continue writing, and began to read more than 3000 words from the perspective of a reader. As a result, he frowned more tightly.

Because he suddenly found that writing in the usual way was really unattractive.

This is the beginning of the tragedy. If there are no other elements to attract readers, how many readers will continue to chase after reading this beginning?

Maybe most of his diehard fans will catch up, but what about new readers?

The update of online text is very fast!

Not only the style and popular themes of online articles have been changing, but also the readers of online articles have been updating! With the increasing pressure of work and life, many people will gradually stop reading online articles, but at the same time, a large number of junior high school students and senior high school students who have just contacted online articles will become new readers every day.

If a writer wants to remain prosperous and popular, he should not only try his best to catch the hearts of old book fans, but also constantly attract new readers.

However, if the beginning of the era of teachers is not brilliant at all, it is just a tragedy written in a regular way. There is no doubt that it will shut out many new readers.

Like the master's loneliness by Lan Di Meichen of the original time and space, it is regarded as a classic by countless people and is known as the classic masterpiece of stream of consciousness. However, countless readers also have very low evaluation on it, and even many people say frankly that this book can't be read at the beginning.

The reason is that a big factor is at the beginning of this book.

The book starts with a long story, has no highlights, and even reads like a chew.

Some fans who like it once said with a smile that this is a test set by Lan Di Meichen for readers. Those who can't pass the test at the beginning are not qualified to see the wonderful behind it.

If the beginning of this book is as wonderful as the middle and late stage, its popularity and evaluation will far exceed its original version.

Not to mention, is that the test set by Lan Di Meichen for the readers? At least Lu Yang has no intention of setting any test for his readers at the beginning. He wants to write according to his own ideas, but he won't be difficult with the readers.

Therefore, in the first two chapters, it uses some novel settings as a selling point to attract readers.

These novel settings may not be his first, but they must be something most readers have never seen. As an old writer who is a man of two generations, he still has this confidence.

For example, at the beginning of the era of teachers, there are several other points.

The feelings that run through the whole plot of the last battle of popular cloud are, for example, the three habitat mecha of popular cloud! Like transformers, land, water and sky can immediately adapt to the battle of these three environments as long as they are transformed once.

In Lu Yang's setting, the popular cloud three habitat mecha is a tiger on land, which is also the appearance of the mecha when he appeared on the battlefield for the first time.

Four limbs on the ground, there are sharp teeth and claws, as well as steel whip and tiger tail. Opening your mouth can spray laser and form tiger roar, and use sound waves to interfere with the operating system of the opponent's mecha.

After the transformation, it can become an eight legged spider. Each foot of the spider has an energy turbine. Once the energy turbine starts, the Eight Legged spider can not only walk quickly under the water, but also walk on the water.

The last change was the four winged fallen angel.

Four of the eight feet of the Eight Legged spider became wings, and the other four became hands and feet.

This is the mecha set by Lu Yang for the popular cloud.

The opponents of the last battle of the popular cloud, Augustus, Ronald gall, bylott, Yuanshang Zhenyi and Lu Yang, have also designed enough mecha to shine in front of people.

For example, Augustus, the blonde man, the mecha designed by Lu Yang is the ultimate model of the knight series.

Lu Yang looks at all the mecha works. Mechas don't have mounts.

However, in Lu Yang's setting, the Knight Series mecha has mounts.

This kind of mecha is a combination of energy mecha and reproductive mecha.

The horse of Augustus, the flame foal, is an energy and chip driven energy mecha. It can charge on land or fight in the sky after starting the golden flame under the horse's hoof.

However, the mecha he wore was an inbred mecha. It was small and driven by spiritual force. When he took it off, it was a suitcase. Once driven, it quickly covered his body surface.

Bylott's mecha is different. His mecha is child mother controlled.

This kind of mecha molecule has two parent bodies. During manipulation, bylott enters the parent body. Through local networking, all instructions of the parent body can be transmitted to other daughter mechas.

The more powerful the master is, the more descendant mecha can be remotely controlled.

As a nine star ace master, bylott can control nine daughter armor through the matrix at the same time, and nine unmanned armor are controlled by him alone.

Finally, yuanshangzhenyi took another different route.

Her mecha is the most traditional humanoid mecha, which is characterized by the humanoid mecha she controls, which is a knife flow outside the mainstream humanoid mecha.

The mainstream humanoid mecha is not only equipped with cold weapons such as knives and swords, but also equipped with hot weapons such as laser guns and tracking missiles. Originally, the humanoid mecha is really controlled by a knife stream, but it is only equipped with a combat knife with the highest strength.

Just like the food carving industry, there are two schools that are good at carving with dozens of knives and one knife in hand without any other knives.

Originally, Zhenyi's sword flows. All battles depend on a sword in his hand.

Lu Yang set her a combination of mecha and ancient martial arts.