Chapter 579

With the level of Dani and Denzel, we can look at Han Yang with new eyes, which shows that this guy really has two brushes.

At this time, Han Yang smiles a little and doesn't feel strange about the performance of Dani and Denzel at this time. He says to them, "the ending you arranged is monotonous. Blindly pursuing the tragic effect, there is no complete combination of the previous characters and story clues. So there will be biased direction, unable to guide the audience empathy, if it is really shot out, it will definitely be a wave of bad comments, and even affect the future of both of you. "

Denny and Denzel wipe the sweat off their heads. He nodded again and again, "Mr. Han is right. We do have this expectation, but as you know, because the stories of the previous six seasons are too perfect, it is very difficult to create the seventh season, which is the final season. Although the original author Lao Niutou tells us the direction of the final characters, there is no huge story and detailed plot to support it, He said that the trend is almost useless, and even bound our minds. On the contrary, it played a bad role. "

Han Yang nodded when he heard this, "you're right. It's like the last few decades of a dream of Red Mansions. Although the author of the creation part also knows the general ending of the dream of Red Mansions, the specific content is rather rough and boring, and the level is far lower than that of the first eight chapters. In my opinion, if he does not know the ending of those characters, he can play freely according to his own thoughts. Maybe it could be better. "

Danni and danzel all nodded and agreed with Han Yang very much. Then they carefully asked him if they had a preliminary idea about the whole story of Episode 7 of the play?

Han Yang nodded and said to them, "there are some ideas. But I don't know where to start. After all, the story is so huge that I can't explain it clearly for a while. I'd better refute it sentence by sentence according to some general clues in your manuscript. And then I'll give you my own idea, which will not only save time, but also make it clear how I would like to end this big play if I was the writer. "

Dani and danzel immediately applauded and agreed, and very urgently hope that Han Yang can tell what he thinks of the ending story.

One side of the dragon war and ye Fei, Wang Bingbing at this time listen to silly eyes, so straight Lengleng watching Han Yang mouth foam flying about the understanding of the screenwriter, dragon war is the entertainment industry. He is also a star in the field of film and television. After listening to Han Yang's views. I have already guessed that Han Yang is the top expert in this field. Of course, I admire him. For the previous distrust of Han Yang, feel very ashamed.

At this time, Han Yang picked up the manuscript, pointed to part of the content above and said, "the zombie battle you arranged is very funny. It's OK to set it at night. After all, zombies like to haunt at night, but you put the cavalry in the first charge, which is very bullshit."

"Do you know that the role of cavalry is to make a detour. Make sure it's on the flank! For frontal charge, infantry should be used, and it is better to use long guns as weapons. What's more, how can a garrison not be equipped with any equipment? A group of people like a fool stood on the wall, waiting for the zombies to climb up and then start. Is it not fast enough to die? "

"Although you two are Westerners, you haven't seen the ancient costume drama of China? Have you heard of rolling wood Thunder Stone? Hot oil should know, right? When the enemy has not climbed up, the hot oil will be poured down, and then the fire will be ignited again. No matter whether you are a human or a ghost, you have to burn charcoal! "

"Although these war dramas can be made up casually, they can't be equated with children's dramas? Your understanding of military history is almost equal to what I should make complaints about.

Danzel and Denny nodded in shame.