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If you want to make a summary, there are a lot of things at a time. I don't know where to start.

Let's talk about the end.

At the end, Roger's departure was decided at the beginning.

The way of leaving is similar to the scene, and slightly echoes the scene when he left Tongma town.

In fact, from the moment Roger walked into the great wetland alone, he was destined to be a brave person forever.

The tone of this book is the same.

Although I tried to shape some supporting roles in the process of writing, they were all superficial. Few supporting roles occupied a particularly large part, except for a tool man.

In this chapter yesterday.

Some book friends joked that the outcome was that the tool man defeated the partner. I watched it and said it was wonderful!

This is indeed the essence.

For Roger.

His heart is strong enough.

He may feel lonely.

You may need company.

But implement it.

At best, he just needs a partner.

He is an epitome of us playing stand-alone games

We may have experienced a magnificent epic plot.

We may have defeated all kinds of monsters.

We may have witnessed the beautiful scenery on the journey.

But we are all alone from beginning to end.

This loneliness is very weighty.

At least I enjoy this feeling.

When playing stand-alone.

I can always immerse myself completely.

I will forget all the troubles and sorrows in the real world.

At that moment, I was invincible.

The same is true of this novel.

In reality, I may be afraid of loneliness, or sentimental, or tired of all kinds of mundane things.

But when I became Roger.

I will become very pure.

Simply getting stronger is enough to make me happy.

This is probably my initial impulse to write this book.

After writing the ending, go back and watch Faye again.

I still slap my thighs narcissistically from time to time:

"What a nice TMD!"

Especially the first one.

What I like most is Roger's journey after he set foot on the southbound road.

It was the best time.

Like our teenagers.

At that time, the scenery was just right and the breeze was not dry.

Everything has just begun.

Start.

It means infinite possibilities.

It contains the yearning that makes people tremble.

People can't wait to see tomorrow.

Strangely enough.

When tomorrow really comes.

No matter how beautiful he is.

It's not as good as what I dreamed.

Laugh.

Faye is a very good work.

Anyway, I like it too much.

Although he has all kinds of shortcomings.

And it also caused a very bad reading experience in the closing stage. I apologize to you again here. If it weren't for the heavy physical and mental damage, I would not suddenly break at the end, even so.

I still think this is a work with a high degree of completion.

Everything that should be written is finished.

The holes dug were also filled in early.

Although many people feel hurried at the end.

But this phenomenon is actually very normal.

Because readers and authors share the same brain.

Most of the time, from the perspective of readers, there are still a lot of imaginable content in the past. This is the charm of the fantasy carrier of words, but there is really no content left on the author's side.

Some experienced readers have already seen the clue.

As a work with the theme of becoming stronger.

In fact, the signal of ending was sent out very early.

And about the change of Roger's mentality.

Will push this signal to the climax.

From an unknown adventurer at the beginning, he later found that he had the strength of the left and right sides, and then changed his cautious nature and the law of being wise to protect himself, so that he became a regular savior later

There is a continuous strengthening process.

However, after reaching the peak.

It's a bit of my own smuggled goods, which is the view that guardians can't be eternal.

Just as the fallen gods were once heroes of the planet.

I have always believed that no matter how strong the will is, it can't resist the corrosion accumulated over time when standing still.

No matter who.

No matter what kind of hero.

Only by moving forward can we maintain vitality.

Otherwise, it will continue to degenerate.

This is an unchangeable law.

So Roger's departure followed this logic.

I used to read many novels.

So and so the protagonist became the creator God, and then lived happily in the same world with the heroine. Such an ending always confused me.

It's like we don't know whether the married life of prince charming and snow white will be full of trivial things. Will those constant protagonists gradually become decadent and conservative after many years?

Everyone may have their own views on this issue.

I won't talk much.

The above is just my own immature smuggled goods.

I still like to keep moving forward.

Even if there is no end.

After talking about your subjective feelings, let's talk about your shortcomings.

In fact, there are many problems in Faye.

Supporting roles are thin.

The repeatability of shuangdian is high.

A large number of detailed settings create great difficulties for later writing.

Such shortcomings can be listed in a large basket.

But for me personally.

The biggest mistake I made was to always adhere to the principle of "no big deal" in the narrative structure.

No matter what the protagonist did.

I seem to have to write it out a little bit.

This is what I found when I looked back at the book during the watch break.

Especially in the later stage.

I should have accelerated the main plot with a detailed and slightly appropriate writing.

If I had to rewrite this book.

I will limit the number of words to 2.4 million.

Cut out unnecessary content.

In order to improve the level of excellence.

This conclusion may be contrary to the ideas of many readers, which is the difference between the reader's perspective and the author's perspective.

Laugh.

In short.

I benefited a lot in the process of Faye's creation.

I personally like this fast-paced way of writing.

This will inevitably lead to later fatigue.

This problem is basically insoluble.

The solution I have come up with at present is to simplify the number of words!

Most of the current online texts are twoorthree million words or even fourorfive million words... To be honest, it's a little too long.

It's better to improve the brilliance and plot density.

So I will probably try to reduce the number of words in the next book.

2.4 million words may be a good space.

Of course, these are just imagination.

How to implement it depends on the subsequent creation.

There seems to be no point in chatting so much at random.

At the thought of this speech, the book is really over.

There will still be some disappointment in my heart.

Thank you for your support and company all the way.

I hope the new book can see more familiar faces.

Good luck.

One button for ten years

On July 13, 2022