Chapter 414

"Ayase has a strong prejudice against otaku. She thinks that otaku's interests are dirty and obscene. She also thinks that otaku's interests are causally related to crime. She calls otaku the criminal reserve. Do you know what I mean?"

"I see. Ayase regards me as a preparatory offender. It seems that I have to find a chance to explain to her." Yusheng felt a headache when he heard what takasaka tongnai said.

"You understand. But I guess I'm a little hung up if I explain."

"Hmm? Why?" Yusheng frowned and asked.

"Ayase, she's prejudiced against you now. I don't think she can see you. Maybe she won't answer when you call."

"Won't be so extreme." Yusheng couldn't help talking when listening to takasaka tongnai's words.

"Maybe."

"Can you please explain it for me? I always feel strange when I think of being perverted and prepared to commit a crime on the spot."

"Don't." takasaka Tong was crisp and refused Yusheng's request.

"Why? Why don't you just explain? Why do you refuse all this?" Yusheng felt a little angry when he saw that Gao Bantong refused even such a small matter.

"Explain what? Explain that the beautiful girl game you want to play is all age oriented? She asked me what is all age oriented. What do I say? Why do I know so well? What do I say? Maybe it explained what to do if I accidentally exposed myself."

"..." Yu Sheng heard that Gao ban Tong refused the reason, did not know how to make complaints about her. After scratching his hair, he said to takasaka tongnai: "forget it, I'll try to explain it to her myself. It's a little to save some impression."

"In fact, even if you tell her it's all age, it's not much better in her eyes."

"You're right. But since she hates house culture, why didn't she have such an attitude when communicating with me and bought my novel."

"I think it's because she read your love novel" five centimeters per second "on the spot. After all, that novel is quite different from ordinary light novels. Besides, she hasn't read your other novels. So she didn't pay attention to your identity before." takasaka Tong thought about it and said his own speculation.

"Hoo... You say you like the things controlled by your sister so much, why don't you drag Ayase into the water." the unwilling Yusheng said to takasaka tongnai.

"It's easy to think. Maybe I killed her as soon as I came out of the water before I dragged her into the water."

"Forget it. I'll solve it myself. I'll hang up first." Yusheng, who straightened out the reason, felt a little annoyed. After two sentences, he was ready to end the call.

"Wait a minute."

"Hmm? What are you doing?"

"Well, novel. My novel."

"Your novel." Yusheng was stunned for a moment, then remembered his previous dialogue with takasaka tongnai, and asked him, "have you written your novel? It can't be casual."

"Hey, don't underestimate me. My novel is very popular now. Many people are reading it."

"Really? Where did you publish it? I'll have a look."

"It's published on XXX website. I'll send you the address. You just help me see what needs to be improved."

"OK, I'll read it before I tell you."

Then they chatted a few more words and ended the call.

After waiting for a while, Yusheng received the message from takasaka tongnai. Yusheng got up from bed and sat in front of the computer. He found each other's novel according to the address sent by takasaka tongnai.

"Sister space?"

Yusheng looked at the title of the novel and couldn't help drawing from the corners of his mouth. Then he looked at it and found that there were almost 20000 words. Although the number of words is small, Yusheng finds that the hits of the novel are still quite high.

So Yusheng ordered to go in and began to have a look.

There were not many words, so Yusheng soon finished reading the novel. Yusheng thinks that although the writing of takasaka tongnai's novel is quite bad, the story is unexpectedly interesting. Putting aside the other party's bad writing, Yusheng wants to continue to read it.

So Yusheng immediately sent a message to takasaka tongnai.

"After reading the novel, do you still have the manuscript?"

"Ah ~ you asked to save the manuscript. Is it very good-looking and want to continue reading." takasaka tongnai at the other end of the network saw the news of Yusheng and smiled at the corners of his mouth.

"Well, although the writing is a mess, the story is still very interesting. People really want to continue to read it."

Gaobantong looked at Yusheng's reply and was a little angry.

"What is a mess of writing? I write very well, OK? What do you know?" takasaka tongnai muttered in his mouth. However, remembering that the other party was an elder in the novel industry, after hesitating for a while, takasaka tongnai still opened the web page, found his own novel and read it again.

As a result, this time, due to the influence of Yusheng, Gao Bantong looked at the novel out of a picky psychology. After reading it, Gao Bantong found that his writing was a little bad, as Yusheng said. Many descriptions made Gao Bantong feel a little embarrassed, and even there were logical loopholes in some places.

At this moment, takasaka tongnai, who was still full of confidence, began to waver in his novel.

"Hey, can't you speak better? Now I think my novel can't work."

Yusheng was surprised to see Gao bantongnai's reply. At first, Yusheng thought he said the other party couldn't write. The other party wanted to quarrel with himself. Unexpectedly, the other party admitted cleanly.

Thinking of this, Yusheng couldn't help laughing. In order not to let gaobantongnai lose confidence, Yusheng quickly comforted her.

"You can do this very well. Your writing can be improved slowly, but it's not so easy to tell a good story. At least your novel is very popular now. So you should be confident and have done well. At least it's much better than when I first wrote a novel."

After receiving Yusheng's reply, takasaka tongnai's mood became a little better.

"You are an elder. You are right in everything you say."

"I'm just telling the truth. Don't make me want to please you on purpose."

"Forget it. Since you say so, can you teach me how to do the novel next?"

"This is your novel. I can't guide you. At most, I'll tell you something about description."

"OK, I'll write it later. You can help me review the manuscript and revise it."

Yusheng's face turned green when he saw takasaka tongnai's reply. I just looked by and got another thing. However, considering that we are friends, Yusheng did not refuse takasaka tongnai, but promised each other.

"Then please. Thank you."

After receiving the other party's thanks, Yusheng suddenly remembered another girl who wrote a novel - black cat.

He asked takasaka tongnai curiously.

"Does the black cat know your novel?"

"Don't mention that guy. I'm angry at him."

Yusheng looked at the text on the screen and was curious.

"What? How did the black cat annoy you?"

"That guy despises my novel."

Yusheng couldn't help laughing when he saw the news. At least in Yusheng's opinion, although takasaka tongnai's novels have various problems, black cat is no better. It's just 50 steps laughing at 100 steps between two people.