Chapter 395

"Maya, what the hell is this?" when Yusheng was patient again, he read the last part of the black cat manuscript. As a result, before long, Yusheng collapsed, shouted and fell the manuscript to the ground.

Originally, the story was normal at the beginning, and Yusheng was barely able to continue reading. As a result, before long, a supporting actor jumped out and began to introduce the protagonist to various world backgrounds. That is, from here, the novel falls into the cycle of pulling the setting again. Yusheng can't help turning to the last page of the novel and finds that the supporting actor hasn't explained the setting to him yet. It is equivalent to that in the preface of the story given by the black cat, more than 90% of the content is about setting, and it is justified. So Yusheng finally couldn't help it.

However, after the manuscript fell to the ground, Yusheng was embarrassed to pick it up and put it away, so as not to make it look damaged. After all, no matter what was written in the black cat's manuscript, Yusheng didn't have the face to break it.

Then looking at the black cat who has been online in the chat software, Yusheng hesitated and decided to send a message to the other party.

"I've finished reading the manuscript."

"Yusheng Jun, what do you think? Is there anything to improve?" the black cat seemed to be waiting for Yusheng to finish reading in front of the computer. Yusheng replied immediately after sending the message a few seconds later.

Yusheng feels the urgency of the black cat from the reply time. For a moment, he doesn't know how to tell the other party. Finally, after hesitating for a while, Yusheng replied to a message in the past.

"It seems that it feels a little subtle."

The black cat on the other end of the computer was a little nervous. After seeing the reply of Yusheng, his breathing was also sluggish. Because of the experience of being rejected many times before, black cat is very self-aware. He knows that Yusheng's reply is not how good his novel is, but euphemistically saying that his novel is not good.

So some lost black cats hit the keyboard and asked Yusheng. "Is there anything wrong with the novel? Or what needs to be improved?"

Yusheng looks at the black cat's question and doesn't know if he should directly say the problem. He is worried about whether it will hit the black cat.

So after a long time, Yusheng organized the language and replied to the black cat with as much euphemism as possible.

"How to say. Although it was interesting and attractive to see the settings in your novel at the beginning, after reading it, I found that these settings occupy too much space."

"But these settings are the essence of my novel."

"You're a novel, not a set." Yu Sheng looked at the reply of the black cat, and make complaints about some toothache. Then reply again.

"But your settings account for nearly 90% of the content. Although the settings are very interesting, too many words will make readers feel tired."

After Yusheng sent it, he found that the message box suggested that the black cat was typing. For fear that the black cat would not give up because of the setting, he hurriedly continued typing.

"Let me make an analogy. It's like people want to eat delicious food when they read your novel. As a result, the restaurant owner began to introduce you to the history, methods and sources of these dishes. Moreover, the introduction hasn't stopped. Originally, everyone was hungry and looking forward to eating dishes, but after entering the store, they just listened to the boss's introduction but couldn't see it Where is the food? Do you understand the feeling? "

Yusheng feels that his analogy has been more euphemistic and appropriate, but after sending it out, he is still waiting for the black cat's response in his heart.

After a long time, Yusheng was relieved when he saw the reply of the black cat.

"I see. I'll correct it."

Yusheng looked at the black cat's reply and felt that the other party should have listened to his own opinions. He couldn't help feeling a little relieved.

"Well, if you have any problems, you can come to me and I can give you some advice. Then when will this manuscript be returned to you?"

"Mr. Yusheng, it's inconvenient for your legs and feet now. Let's put it in your place for the time being until your legs are ready."

Yusheng frowned at the reply of the black cat.

"But will it be inconvenient without the original, if you want to modify the novel."

"It doesn't matter. I keep those settings in mind."

"All in mind?" Yusheng looked at the reply of the black cat and looked at the manuscript at hand. This thick manuscript has at least 100000 words, of which nine are set. Yusheng suddenly feels that it is not a simple thing to give the black cat a suggestion for writing a novel.

So Yusheng has a headache and replies to the other party. "In short, you should let the setting be less. It's best to integrate the setting perfectly into the plot of the novel. It feels like you have a delicious food. You feel a little curious. When you ask the boss, the boss jumps out to introduce the food to you. That's the feeling. Do you understand?"

"I'll try."

Then Yusheng ended the call with the black cat with some uneasiness, praying that the other party could listen to his own opinions. Yusheng said he really didn't want to read the set again.

However, since he chatted with the black cat, Yusheng naturally thought of takasaka tongnai. He looked and found that the other party was just ahead, so he sent a message.

"Are you there?"

"Yes, what's up?"

"No, I just feel like I haven't been in touch for some time, so say hello."

"Hehe, so you have nothing to do to harass me?"

For takasaka tongnai's reply, Yusheng is also covered with black lines.

"It's all right. I'll go."

Looking at the other party's reply, Yusheng thought. He felt that it was a little boring to end the dialogue so simply. So after thinking about it, I was ready to ask takasaka tongnai about yarn fog.

"I want to consult you about something."

"Oh? It's about my sister again? When can your novel be finished? I've been waiting for a long time."

"The first draft of the novel has been prepared, but I'm not very satisfied, so it's under revision."

"Oh, can you show me the first draft?"

"No!" for whom takasaka Tong depends on his love letter to shawu, Yusheng resolutely refused.

"Stingy. But what do you want to ask?"

"Well, if a girl likes reading novels like the Virgin Mary, do you think she will?"

"Absolutely like girls!!!" through three exclamation points, Yusheng seems to feel takasaka Tong's firm and positive attitude. Yusheng is more and more worried about yarn fog.

"Who is this girl who likes girls? It's someone you know."

"No, I asked casually." after several hidden events were discovered, Yusheng felt that girls had the potential to become famous detectives, so he resolutely refused to reveal too much.

"Hehe, I don't believe it."

"But how are you doing? How are you doing?"

"That's it. Please be a good girl at school, play games and quarrel with that guy when you get home."

Yusheng understands that the guy in takasaka Tong's mouth refers to the black cat. He can't help but move in his heart. He doesn't know whether takasaka Tong knows about each other's novel writing.