Chapter 123

"Yu Shengjun, I've finished reading the part of the novel you sent me." during the recess, an Yilun, who finished reading some of the novels, also came to Yu Sheng's seat and said to Yu Sheng.

"How's it going?" Yusheng asked with some expectation.

"I feel... A little ordinary." an Yilun also thought about his words and said to Yusheng.

"Ah, is that so?" hearing an Yilun's answer, Yusheng became a little lost. At the same time, I was thinking that the original system is not omnipotent.

An Yilun also saw Yusheng's loss and thought about it. He decided to tell Yusheng his detailed feelings about reading the novel.

"The novel Yu Shengjun showed me, how to say... The writing looks very good. And the conversation when the cherry blossoms fall at a speed of five centimeters per second is also very interesting." an Yilun also found out the advantages of the novel and said.

"What else?" Yusheng heard, and some hope rose in his heart.

"However, beyond the speed of five centimeters per second, the novel doesn't feel very amazing. It gives me a very ordinary feeling. Maybe it's because there are too few parts you gave me and the story hasn't started. So I don't know what I found later. It's really hard to make too many comments."

After listening to an Yilun's evaluation, Yusheng felt that what he said was more pertinent. Indeed, he didn't write too much content yesterday because he was lazy. He wanted to get high evaluation from an Yilun's mouth only by relying on the story of one or two sections, and he also wrote whimsical.

"So, Wang Jun, what is the story of this novel?" suddenly a girl's voice inserted the dialogue between Yusheng and an Yilun.

"Ah! It's Kato. I write novels or something casually." Yusheng remembered when he saw Kato Hui, and the other party sat at his front table. As a result, he ignored her recently. Now that she knows about writing novels, Yusheng becomes a little worried.

Now the speed of five centimeters per second seems a little bad, so he can only sacrifice the magic forbidden book directory, but Kato Hui knows that he writes novels. If he goes to tell yusaka Meiqin them. So let Yuban Meiqin and the magic forbidden book catalogue together. Yusheng is a little worried about what will happen.

So Yusheng looked at Kato Hui solemnly and said to her.

"Kato, don't tell others that I write novels. I'm a little embarrassed."

"Well, I won't tell anyone else. But I'm curious about the story written by Wang Jun." Kato Hui thought Yusheng should be really embarrassed to let others know, so he was very considerate and agreed.

"Yu Shengjun, why don't you roughly tell me how you're going to write the story? Maybe I can give you some advice." an Yilun also suggested in due time.

Yusheng thinks about it and feels that after such a long time of contact with an Yilun, Yusheng still trusts his character. Therefore, Yusheng thinks that even if he tells him, he should not come to plagiarize his creativity. As for Kato Hui, Yusheng subconsciously ignored her.

So he introduced the plot of five centimeters per second to an Yilun.

"I intend to start three consecutive short stories with a teenager as the story axis. The first one is cherry blossom manuscript, which describes the feelings of love between Guishu and Mingli when they were young and the day they met again. The second one is astronaut, which describes the life after Guishu and Mingli separated from each other from the perspective of Chengtian flower seedlings who have a good feeling for Guishu who entered high school. The third one is "Five centimeters per second" depicts the inner hesitation of Guishu and Mingli when they grow up. "Here, Yusheng paused a little and drank water.

"Hmm, HMM. continue." an Yilun also listened carefully to Yusheng's description and motioned him to continue.

"First of all, first of all, you see some of them. According to my plan, I'm going to..."

Yusheng introduced the general content of his story and his writing ideas, while an Yilun and Kato Hui listened carefully to Yusheng's explanation, nodded and praised Yusheng's clever arrangements.

"At the end of the story, I'm going to let Guishu go back to the place where Mingli asked him the question of five centimeters per second. There is a tall cherry tree beside the railway, with petals flying slowly. Let him recall that question. When Guishu passed the railway track, he passed by a woman. Suddenly he realized that the woman might be Mingli. So he walked through the railway completely He slowly turned around and looked at the woman. She also slowly turned around, and their eyes crossed. At the moment when their hearts and memories were about to boil, the passing train blocked their vision. At this point, I intend to end the story. "

"Ah, is it over? I want to continue to listen." Kato felt a little sorry to hear that the story came to an abrupt end.

"Yusheng Jun, write it out!" after an Yilun heard Yusheng's description, he put his hands on Yusheng's shoulders and solemnly said to Yusheng.

"Eh? Didn't you say this story was ordinary before? Did it become unusual after listening to me tell the outline of the story?" Yusheng was a little surprised and said to an Yilun.

"No, the story is still very ordinary. But after listening to your description, I have to be ordinary but refreshing, ordinary and memorable." an Yilun also paused, as if he wanted to think about what words to use to express his feelings.

"The story I'm telling doesn't have as many attractions as those I've seen. There are no exaggerated settings, no extraordinary twists and turns, and no dog blood plot. It's just like the life of ordinary people."

Then Ann Yilun clenched his fist.

"But that's why. It's totally different from those flirtatious bitches outside! Yu Shengjun!" an Yilun also said this in the form of shouting.

Suddenly, the people in the class were attracted by Yusheng, especially the girls, looking at an Yilun with disdain.

"Shh! Keep your voice down! Keep your voice down!" Yusheng quickly pulled an Yilun's clothes and asked him not to be so loud.

"Ah, I'm sorry. I can't help it. I can't help it." Ann Yilun also touched his head in embarrassment, then lowered his voice and continued.

"Wang Jun's story doesn't want other love novels to make people feel a sense of distance. Although I'm not old and haven't experienced such a thing, I always feel that Wang Jun's story doesn't happen to me or to people I know. It feels very close to me." Kato Hui took the opportunity to get angry about her feelings.

"And the ending chosen by Yu Shengjun is also good. Mingli finally meets Guishu. What will happen to them in the end? An open ending makes people think a lot."

"Ha ha... Is that so?" in fact, Yusheng plans to write according to the ending of the film. He thinks it will be more interesting if people disappear after the train, but since Kato Hui is also there, Yusheng has changed to an open ending, so as not to make Kato Hui feel uncomfortable after listening.

"So, Mr. Yusheng. Please write it. Please. I believe with your writing, this story will be very good."

"Ha ha, really? Then I'll try to write it out." Yusheng, who was affirmed, regained a little confidence.

"Wang Jun, can you show me what you have written?" Kato Hui asked.

"Don't worry, I'll show it to Kato when it's written." Yusheng happily shows his teeth and assures Kato Hui.